I felt the story of the original animation didn't deliver the punchline as well as I wanted it to. I decided to place more focus on the mage character--giving her some time to rush over, consider the situation, then act. Since she gets a mini character arc, her frustration at the end has a little more value, and the joke lands better.
Book Rig Credit goes to: http://www.redesigndavid.com/single/2011/5/5/book-rig-for-download
Book Rig Credit goes to: http://www.redesigndavid.com/single/2011/5/5/book-rig-for-download
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